Overall - 5/10
+++Graphics+++ Score: 3
Thats the main thing u should work on. The animation was allright, but u shall add more background and draw characters better.
+++Style, Interactivity+++ Score: 3 each
Lock legion... it will be cooler if u make not sticks, not clocks/glocks/locks, not sprites but a movie u draw urself.
+++Sounds+++ Score: 4 (but it deserves 2)
Well, you had sounds and thats something, but u used Speakonia or some program like that. Next time use real voices (i used speakonia in one of my movie and it got low score) but i gave ur movie 4 for sound cause its lock legion (so u better dont make locks anymore).
+++Violence+++ Score: 2
Well, the violence was when the guy flied in space, but i gave it 2, violence is not big, so the main score will be more if violence is 2 but not 8 (exept if it has a good humor)
+++Humor+++ Score: 7
What can i say? Overall - 5/10! Nice but u have to work on it.
thanks for the criticism, but I'll be a lock for a while, It really helps you with flash.
Very very very good :)
I voted 5 on this, because... I LIKE IT :D
Its very good!
Hey, where did u get the music?
Can you put a link pls :)
I voted 5 on your stuff tutorial! YAY! My buddy said he made it but I really, really doubt that. Sorry for no link :(
lol thats cool!
Ahahahhahahahha ahahahhah this made me laugh lol :P a bit short and still needs some work though.. nice job anyway i liked it ;D i hope it wont get blammed...
Man im fan of WarCraft 3, didnt play TFT & WoW tough... you are cool man! Make more please please please :)
It has got alot of bugs, work on it, and it was a bit boring too... sorry. it would be better if at every level the place changes. And what was that patrol truck shooting with? sorry, u need to work on it more.
Im going to use that :)
Hey, nice one! I'll use that in my Half Life 2 flash :)
Wow, thanks a bunch!
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